By doing these tasks, I have learned more about how to write pieces of academic essay in more formal language. I think making an outline before writing an essay is a very good idea in developing good essay. Thesis and topic sentences play an important role in an essay, and I found that to be the hardest thing to do. I also feel that my topic sentences aren’t that good, therefore I asked people to check them out before I submit the drafts. Another thing that I have learnt is about making footnotes. In my opinion footnotes are unnecessary, but they are very important. I also learned more about BlackBerry and its history in apparel.
I am most proud of my complete essay, which is a compare and contrast about BlackBerry and iPhone. I have learned so much about their similarity and differences.
I think I have succeeded in making 4 of my pieces, except for the multimedia text. Because I procrastinate in doing that, and I know that is a bad thing to do. I kind of confuse how to make a multimedia text with opinion, but after I did that, I feel really relieved.
After doing all of these tasks, I just realized that if I started to make these earlier, I might get better grades than now. And I have learned many things in doing these tasks.
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